Ben wrote an excellent response to this video clip! He wrote from the perspective of the squirrel, recounting the tough day he had!
It began like any other day. The leaves were swaying down
The sunshine lit up the forest which is my home. I was looking around for a tasty
nut. Well lucky for me that I found one. That day
I was hanging on a tree eating my big tasty nut. Then
I sensed danger. I looked around, when I
saw it was the evil hideous eagle staring straight at me! I tried to hide
but he caught me. So the race was on. I ran as fast as
I could . I ran up a tree I jumped on branches , then when I
saw a big gap I was thinking in my head , “can I
make it?” I didn't know what to do so I just jumped.
I closed my eye’s then I opened them I said to my
self, “am I in heaven?” Then when I thought I saw an angel
with wings came flying down to me I said take me to heaven
and then when I looked properly with my little eye’s it was the evil
hideous eagle flying toward’s me again! So, I got up, ran
all the way to my my nest I was safe... but not for long . Then The ugly bird
was waiting outside for me to come out he got too tired
waiting for me so he came to my nest and started
shaking my nest he shook it until i came out! So I fell
out of my nest. I landed on the leaves on the ground. I got back up .
Then when I remembered what my dad said to me when I was little,
“Son, don't give up, don't let anything stop you”. So I persevered
and started running and running until I found a hole in a tree I ran all the way
up the tree and jumped in the hole the bird tried to get in but he was too fat
so from now I call him fatty .
hi mrs h i like the video i remembered i watched it with my class
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